It wasn't Love at first sight,
Kinda friendship as it started first.
We talked and we messaged.
For hours and till the balance die.
She told me, she misses me,
When I wasn't near her.
She told me, she loves me,
When I cared her much more.
Well, I was such a narrow minded,
To realize, that she s very broad minded!
I told her that I love her too,
She smiled but not replied.
She had other friends,
Like I've as my own friends.
But I was becoming very possessive,
I've heard its human nature.
I couldn't see I'm losing my friends.
My time, studies for her.
My friends told me don't trust a girl,
They told, girls are,
Most unreliable creatures on earth!
But I'd seen good ones in my life.
So I kept my ears closed.
But she, managed everything with her.
Proving again and again, that I'm just a fool.
And now, our course about to finish,
She told me, that she can't accept me.
She told me, that she got another boyfriend!!
I'd felt a sudden pause in my heart
I lost all my senses
I lost all my faith
I cried loud to hear someone
But all ears were busy
I never felt hungry anymore
I never found whats sound sleep
I found myself loosing..
When I look at the mirror,
"You are a loser", it shouted back.
I'd no options left in my life
I told her that I'll suicide.
"It doesn't matter to me", she replied!
I kept thinking, What to do?
Sun went and the moon came
Moon went and the birds sung
At last, I made up my mind.
I took my blades and poison.
I always feared when I used blades,
But this time, they seemed my only hope
I cut my vein and ate the poison.
Blood, gushed out as soothing words.
I could feel a little pain in my hand
But not as much when she hurt my heart.
Sight became blurred and blurred
But a sudden thought, stuck my mind
Will she be sad hearing this?!!
Will she cry seeing this?!!
I wanted to say, don't cry my baby..
Well, that was my Love, still in this moment.
Last I found what a sound sleep s like.
Dreaming a world different from this.
which will 've only me,
And a girl of my own...
[In the world of love cheating is just not acceptable]
really touching!
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ReplyDeleteit sounds so sad ...
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@ Josohana
Life s like that.. and I dont know ur language :(
heyy dont lose hope...there is some1 4 every1 so jus hang in there n wait 4 her :)))
ReplyDeleteThe world is full of love.
ReplyDeleteTake Care.
Kisses.
@ trinaa,sealed lips
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good one!
ReplyDeleteif u've written it, its a really great one to write, but pretty bad for an experienced one!
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Sumanth
Really loved it!! Kinda touched my heart...
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ReplyDeletewell lik sadu said ...no commentz :-(
ReplyDeleteThis post was really deep!!! Love can be messy, yet it is sooooooo beautiful!
ReplyDeleteNe.
i m very inexperienced to comment on this. but wanna tell this much that guy is immature to take such a decision. now i know hw this much suicide n attempts r going on :(
ReplyDeleteforgot to tell u that i like the TITLE more than poem ver catching n meaningful one hatsoff to u LOVE MARRY SUICIDE....gr8
ReplyDeletegood narration hmmmmmmm
ReplyDeleteliked it very much
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