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Thursday, May 7, 2009

Mobile worries


I wish If I Could throw my Mob,
Off the river and watch the flow washing the messages.

I wish if I could laugh looking at it,
And celebrate my victory against the radio waves.

There wont be complaints anymore,
Like, you didn't call/msg me.

There wont be any hard feelings,
Like, She could 've miss called me, at least.
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31 comments:

  1. joie de vivreMay 8, 2009 at 12:51 PM

    so you feel bad that she didnt called or misscalled you either?? or you are fed up of mobiology??

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  2. RandeepMay 8, 2009 at 1:01 PM

    Oh Neha.. I hate people like you. Its difficult to hide something from u people. And you guys ask it straight to eyes. Well, actually, I'm tired of both, to throw my mob..

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  3. NazeehaMay 8, 2009 at 5:34 PM

    its beautiful :)

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  4. PavitraMay 8, 2009 at 11:49 PM

    haha.....nice one.....!!
    well written...

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  5. UnknownMay 9, 2009 at 2:03 PM

    the poem ..well it didn't impress me much..you can improve your creative thinking and get one written in a more organized and meaningful manner..you should find better ways to express your feelings other than missed calls and stuffs.. ;)

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  6. RandeepMay 9, 2009 at 2:14 PM

    @Nesi
    :)

    @Pavitra
    Thank you

    @Rohit
    Thank you critic. My ex-roommate. I'll try to improve. hehe ;)

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  7. SADUMay 10, 2009 at 11:23 AM

    after days of obscurity,psychos back with a bang.this shit will take the english literature world by storm.

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  8. RandeepMay 10, 2009 at 12:03 PM

    :(

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  9. LuciferMay 10, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    mobile is d main reason for heartaches...i agree

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  10. Rakesh VanamaliMay 12, 2009 at 1:42 PM

    I will agree with Mayank...... I read somewhere , one telephone is utility, two is luxury, three is opulence and none is paradise!

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  11. Love BluckMay 15, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    Good one really...Remember the other time my frnd called the cell a Communication Breaker...So true...Keep Writing

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  12. RandeepMay 15, 2009 at 5:03 PM

    @ Mayz
    :)

    @Rakesh
    Welcome to my blog. Thanks for ur comment :)

    @Shama
    may I hv ur friends "mobile" number ;)

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  13. sowmyabalakrishnanMay 18, 2009 at 5:41 PM

    sorry tat comment was fr expectations n heart...ninte mobile ullathum illathathum kanakka...kalanjek ;p

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  14. raniaMay 27, 2009 at 5:53 PM

    not so good...got to improve a lot....

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  15. Luscious Sealed LipsMay 29, 2009 at 12:26 AM

    I have my monthly 'No Mobile Phones' 'No Technology Dependency' Days, which I Love the most.

    Kisses.

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  16. UnknownMay 29, 2009 at 1:13 AM

    ayooo sentii aaayiiii,,,,,atheee endooo wot waves,,,,radiooo,,,?>>?

    :)..juz kiddn,,,

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  17. RandeepMay 29, 2009 at 8:50 PM

    @Sowmya
    :)

    @Rania
    Yes Ma'm. Thank you. ;)

    @L
    'No Mobile Phones' & 'No Technology Dependency' Days.. wooww.. I'll try them.. Nice idea. Thank you

    @Thulsi
    Hey monkey fool.. Hmmm... :)

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  18. DiyaMay 31, 2009 at 11:45 PM

    Material worries can also be beautiful! lol :P
    Is the mobile worrying u sooo much? Then you can as well give that to me, mine has gone out of itz head. :( :P

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  19. divsiJune 3, 2009 at 12:43 PM

    hey randeep...first of all.. gud post..no seriusly...how much ppl disavow n deny...no we dont feel like our cells away...yup sumtime evryone feels like dat;) tho its not a very viable option :p lol

    p.s: my real name is divyakshi:)

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  20. RandeepJune 3, 2009 at 1:14 PM

    @ Diya
    Thank you. I'll think of giving u, when it becomes a big pain :) Have fun.

    @ Divsi
    Hehe.. I agree with you.. :) Thank you.. do visit often..

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  21. NiBuLJune 4, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    I wish If I Could throw my Mob,
    Off the river and watch the flow washing the messages.

    [You still have not deleted that one SMS, if i Remeber correctly...My room mate]



    I wish if I could laugh looking at it,
    And celebrate my victory against the radio waves.
    [Wat the Hell!]

    There wont be complaints anymore,
    Like, you didn't call/msg me.


    There wont be any hard feelings,
    Like, She could 've miss called me, at least.

    ...and The OSCAR goes to...!!
    Mr. Shithead Roommate

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  22. अनिल कान्तJune 5, 2009 at 12:16 AM

    Nice post...we all feel like that sometimes

    मेरी कलम - मेरी अभिव्यक्ति

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  23. RandeepJune 6, 2009 at 12:04 PM

    @ Nibul
    No comments to Roommiee :)

    @ Anilkant
    Thank you for commenting. Visit often :)

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  24. Angels Never LieJune 20, 2009 at 8:54 PM

    Thats v true...life cud hav been v simpler w/o mob bt it has made certain things easier as well....nywy nicely written....

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  25. RandeepJune 21, 2009 at 2:37 PM

    @ Angel
    Of course mob is really usful. Thanks for following my blog. And thanks for the comment too.. Visit often :)

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  26. Mahesh SindbandgeJune 21, 2009 at 8:04 PM

    Randeep

    Beautifulthat is....

    mobiles are one way through which ppl make million complaints..

    You got a nice blog!

    Cheers

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  27. RandeepJune 22, 2009 at 4:19 AM

    @ Mahesh

    Very true.. Thanks for commenting. Visit often :) have fun :)

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  28. ZebaJune 27, 2009 at 12:44 PM

    Awwwwwwwn. Somehow I find this post very CUTE!!! love the writing style too..

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  29. RandeepJune 30, 2009 at 8:52 PM

    OOOOW... Thank you.. :) :)

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  30. priyagJuly 11, 2009 at 2:14 PM

    nice !!!!!!

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  31. RandeepJuly 15, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    @ Unnimol
    Thank you :)

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Be nice ;) Thats all.

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