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Saturday, July 18, 2009

My childhood friend!


In those days we thought only about us.
We wandered here and there playing,
Sharing all those chocolates we got.
When I sang, u laughed.
when u laughed, I cried.
And then you danced!
When you got into any problem,
I stayed with you,
Holding your hands,
Taking the responsibility of all those things you've done,
wiping your tears..
Till the darkness we sat on that bench,
thinking will we be scolded?
Last we departed saying I'll talk for you,
promising, I wont tell its you did it.
Thus we got our shares for each other.
but we smiled, kissing those wounds,
hugging each other.
As days went on,
age created a wall between us.
We shared our problems no more,
now we hardly speak for another.

We can never be those little cute innocent ones again..
But cant we be friends forever?

17 comments:

  1. is this pure imagination????;p
    sach boliye!!!!?;) hehe

    its lovely!

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  2. Till the darkness we sat on that bench,
    thinking, will we be scolded?
    Back with his Lookie-here-Im-a-Poet-Now Stuff!!
    Asshole!

    (But This one is kinda nice!
    ..better than
    Makane ninak Talayil vekkan Chembarathi poo veno?
    Achante thalayil Chembarathi Kaavanu!!)

    Last we departed saying I'll talk for you,
    promising, I wont tell its you did it.
    Thus we got our shares for each other.
    but we smiled, kissing those wounds,



    Enik manasilayilla....

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  3. @ Divsi
    Hehe.. I still dream a lot about my childhood. Thank you.

    @ Nibul
    Grr.. Mmm.. Ninak onnum manasilavilla..

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  4. " We can never be those little cute innocent ones again..
    But cant we be friends forever? "

    its really nice and really cute :)

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  5. A very cute one there. Thank God it's fiction (acc. to ur label)It's horrible when childhood friends bichadofy when they grow up..
    nice blog u have btw :D

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  6. @ Nesi
    mmmm... thank u..

    @ Mads
    Welcome to my blog. thanks for commenting :)

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  7. but still...sm childhood frns remain forever with us...FRIENDS FOREVER!!

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  8. I liked your blog very much.Its very nice and I appreciate for your beautiful post.Now I have become your follower so I will be visiting your blog.You are welcome in my blogs.

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  9. Gudone, its soo true...
    bt ofcourse"can b frnds forever"
    i think frnds r meant to b forever, whther they filled our child lives or teenage days, they will stay n we will always remember them at one or other point of time..

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  10. @ Paramveer
    Ya some will :)

    @ Babli
    woooo thank you.. Sure I'll

    @ Bhavya
    :)

    @ Angel
    yes :) true.

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  11. sometimes its more complicated than a wish.. beautiful poem Randeep..

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  12. wow!!tht was so beatifully expressed. :) If this is ur own imagination then kudos to u.

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  13. @ Rane
    Complicated!!! welcome to my blog :) Thanks for commenting :)

    @ Ria
    Thank you. :) visit often..

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  14. It was simply super. It reminded me of all my childhood friends. One has remained while the rest are scattered!

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  15. @ Esther
    :) Welcome to my blog. Thanks for visitng and commenting :)

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