Sunday, April 25, 2010

Childhood friend [2]

She was walking towards her car. With hands full of covers. She was going somewhere for enjoying the summer vacation. She was talking loud. She has a sweet voice.

She was looking her friend. With open mouth. She was curious where her friend is going. It was raining. So she couldn't go near the car.

Lakshmiiiii.. Shirya called. I'm going. Tata.. She was very happy to tell her friend that she is going somewhere. She kept telling Tata, tata to Lakshmi.

Even Lakshmi seemed excited. Her friend is going somewhere. She shouted back Goodbye Shriya... Tata.. tata..

Shriya's mom closed the door. Started the car. Shriya opened the glass and kept telling bye, tata..

She was jumping with happiness. She didnt ask where Shriya is going. Or when she will be back. She was running behind the car. As long as she can run. When it disappeared, she stood there. Still smiling, shouting goodbye.

Shriya lives in a big house. Her parents are working in big IT companies. Lakshmi lives just in front of Shriya's house. In street. Her parents do laundry work. How long their friendship will last...?


  1. Oh! Fuk!

    Not again.... Grow up You lil wannabe Writer!

    Was expecting a Decent post after the God ones from you Recently..
    This one SuX!!!

    Dont Reject this Comment!!
    Be Democratic!

  2. hey indirectly, it shows incredible india and gap between poor and rich!
    i like the way u represented content in a very small post and still able to bring out so many emotions in it!

  3. i hate gudbyes:(
    but u kno wats innocent bout kiddie gudbyes...?
    kids kip wavin n wavin n not stoppin!!
    waitin for the next....:))

  4. how long will their memory last...?

  5. @ NiBuL
    Sorry for disappointing you, roomie :)

    @ Paramveer
    Yeah you got it. Two extremes.

  6. @ Divsi

    Yeah me too hate them, if its forever.

    @ Mayz

    When they realize one is rich and other one is poor. :)

  7. If her parents working with a BIG IT COMPANY , i think the friendship may last forever. :P


  8. @ techworld
    Thank you. :)

    @ Cheerzz
    :P :) ;)

  9. :( felt sad readin this ...friends they depart from each other at one pt or the other in their life !!... good post dheez.. :)

  10. @ You dont have to be sad. You have no friends na :P to miss..


Be nice ;) Thats all.

Twitter Bird Gadget