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Monday, August 15, 2011

You name it [3]

I thought:

You are thinking I am busy.
and I am ignoring you.
That you are no more there in my thoughts.
But the mistake was your's.
And so on.

Until:

Our eyes met,
and froze for a few seconds.

Then:

All thougths vanished.
And there were only regrets.
Posted by AT
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7 comments:

  1. the other side of meAugust 16, 2011 at 6:06 AM

    Interesting post ;)you left me to wondering...:P:P

    i dono why but I hope there'll be a continuation for this poem:):)

    take care and write more!!!

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  2. RandeepAugust 16, 2011 at 6:36 AM

    @ the other side of me
    :) Thank you.

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  3. UnknownAugust 22, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    One thing that no human wants to feel but invariably ends up with a shit-load of - REGRET.

    Beautiful writing!

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  4. RandeepAugust 23, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    @ CynicalOxymoron™
    true. thanks for commenting. have fun. tc.

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  5. Anna ElissaOctober 12, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    I especially love the last two lines.
    So strong.

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  6. RandeepOctober 12, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    @ Anna Elissa
    Thank you. :) Have fun. Visit often.

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  7. HasifDecember 22, 2011 at 10:10 PM

    Very nicely put. Everyone has this feelings.

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Be nice ;) Thats all.

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